These days, many people argue that you are changing your lifestyle it would come with a good thing. Others claim that they should be stable in life. In my opinion, whether to change lifestyle or not changing it depends on how happy are you with what you have in your life.
Firstly, many people may become comfortable with the routine they are following in daily. For examples, some people are satisfied with their work, or people may not need to learn new things as they have already so many things to do in their activities that they habitually perform. On the other hand, some people are not satisfied with their lives, but they are afraid to change their lifestyles because it would cause them physical pain or they think that their condition will be worse than present condition.
Secondly, some people like to change in their lives, because they think they will have steady lifestyles. Such as, they do some alteration in work or concentrate on their favourite activities as that would give a sense of enjoyment. In addition, many people are not satisfied with their lives. For example, they move to other countries in the hope of getting a better living, so successful in life are often achieved when a person tries to explore new ideas, which might prove to be beneficial for the improvement of his or her life.
Finally, making a change in life or may influence too many people. The new idea, a new way of life, often brings new opportunities to people and adapting to the change is primary means of survival and advancement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74721189591 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43655839117 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513011152416 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8143806093 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218550598524 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09199110109 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733933782256 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135181419479 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588471525854 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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