The chart gives information about the percentage of vehicle journey of divers in 2005 by different purposes and genders. The overall of the proportion of drivers commuted to work by cars the most sex of the driver was men by 53% and women by 19%. However, women had the higher percentage of traveling to shopping by vehicle 18%.
In 2005, the proportion of men were travelled to a bank and running errands by 5%. On the other hand, women were driving a car to visit friends by 8%, running errands by 10% and bank 9 %. Women were traveling by cars to the course more than men by 12% while men were commuted by a vehicle by 8%.
Summaries, the approximate percentage of a vehicle by sex was used with different ways of the journey. Like, traveling to visit the town by women 3% and Recreation 4 %. However, journey by cars of men to visiting the town and Recreation by 8% and 11%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46296296296 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55332044026 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475308641975 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8980370004 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143794389286 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645976466918 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443574396327 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105227846552 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655865456955 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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