Some people said that with the help of parenting and child development courses parent can improve the life of children. To what extend to do agree or disagree?
Give reasons for you own answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
It is common say that parenting comes without a manual, that is learning as goes. However, there is a school of thought that argues parents should take training courses to enhance their children's quality of life. From my view, I endorse and outline this statement because it is of essential importance get the specific knowledge about how adequately raise a child.
First, parents not only have to feed and shelter their children, they also have to educate them properly. Unfortunately, many parents, particularly new ones, do not have a clue of how do so and obtain positive results, raise a responsible and good citizen. That is why, many local governments promote and encourage parents to take specialized courses, designed to help mothers and fathers with a wide range of subjects such as basic health care, among others, which provide the basic, but also fundamental guidance about child development and education.
Second, it is true that a baby deserve unconditional love, and care. However, the way family's child show and deliver its affection, protection and devotion to their children should be properly exerted it. Thus, parents should receive knowledge about child's psychology and behavior to avoid either spoiling their children or building a weak self-esteem, which can result in a shy or introverted child. In Spain, for instance, aware of how important is hold a good command of psychology, offers free course on this matter that families can take even online.
To sum up, although it is true that certain knowledge are only acquired through experience, or cannot be taught in a classroom, it is obvious that parents need to be trained in specific topics or issues, which definitely help to improve the child's well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15845070423 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74991433745 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6580021918 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.181818182 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204367001484 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695955196084 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366468246874 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118556294005 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172875247834 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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