In modern days, all products are sold with the support of advertising. Although an increase in sales from advertising benefits budget of a country, disappointment on items consumers bought is rising day by day. In this essay, I will support both sides with examples and represent a conclusion.
One side of the argument, there are people who claim that the spread of items among the public is directly related to the gross domestic product (GDP) which is an essential force for the economy of a county. Furthermore, advance in technology such as smartphone, television, and radio brought a chance to distribute a lot amount of products. Developed and developing countries which can use this chance are leading GDP of the world. One particularly good example is the USA where sales of a smartphone which only use one method of marketing which is advertising occupy a high percentage of the trade.
On the other hand, it is also possible to argue that after buying items which are portrayed in advertising, a satisfaction of people is insufficient because a need for these products is unlike their imagination. In addition, in some cases, it is common that these items purchased also are useless. People often have this opinion because the tricks of advertising enlarge value of the products. One of the important illustrations is that companies of advertising use ways such as light and shadow, variety of color and increasing size. Otherwise, in a competitive area in business, they have not a choice to reject these tricks. As a result, it is inevitable that people disregard the items as soon as buying real products.
In conclusion, governments may support the use of advertising because of the benefits of financial. By contrast, it is not until we buy products that we cannot know the real appearance. In my opinion, this drawback is so hard for consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97115384615 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96252168993 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548076923077 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0214792488 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168406731367 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507717920124 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040954171119 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989942265259 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386931270956 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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