Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Some others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
In this materialistic world, companies are trying to sell their products more and more through advertisement because this is the best source of marketing. Some people deem that these ads are nothing but public incentives to buy unnecessary things, While others contradict the statement and believe that commercials contain the product details as well as aware the masses about the product. I completely agree that advertisement makes people to buy useless things.
Mostly ads are prepared to get the people's attention and make them buy the product. The ads are made so beautiful that people may not stop themselves and purchase the product. Consequently, they buy unnecessary things and sometimes due to these purchases they fall into debt. this statement is true as per the last year survey which was published by the Indian government stated that the expenditure of the people double compares to the previous year as the people influenced by advertisement.
Furthermore, these commercials contain a good amount of information which helps consumers to buy a product as per their need and also give them a chance to compare with other product. but sometimes few ads have exaggerated information, so people are being influenced by this fake information and they buy the product and getting cheated. For instance, last year my friend bought a power bank by saw advertise on tv. In the ad they mention that this product charged minimum two phones but actually after using 2 to 3 week, my friend realize that this was not capable to charge more than one phone.
weighting all the compelling arguments, I believe that advertise is the main reason behind the public's unnecessary purchases and also responsible for increasing the rate of people fall into debt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... Mostly ads are prepared to get the peoples attention and make them buy the product...
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Suggestion: This
...o these purchases they fall into debt. this statement is true as per the last year ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...a chance to compare with other product. but sometimes few ads have exaggerated info...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... phones but actually after using 2 to 3 week, my friend realize that this was not ca...
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Suggestion: Weighting
...pable to charge more than one phone. weighting all the compelling arguments, I believe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14236111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81314078777 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6049433254 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189278162437 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770933401076 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437329363659 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115863392654 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466254720502 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.