Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your opinion
In the modern world, when shopping can be done on many online platforms such as Amazon, people rely more on advertising business strategies to refine their purchasing and marketing skills. Although many people believe in the efficacy of the advertising world that instigates them to buy newly launched products, a few consider it as a fallacious trick which no longer serves and interests the consumer. This essay would endeavor to shed some light on the driving forces that encourage this increasingly emerging belief among the masses and presents my own perspective on the same.
To begin with, it is an irrefutable fact that with the daily promotions on media and on the printed newspapers or flyers, buyers get familiar with new products and related offers. Moreover, customers get highly influenced when stuff is advertised by their favorite screen stars. For example, the way product is launched in front of the consumer market is highly synonymous with their buying attitude.
In contrast, a section of society discards the persuading techniques followed by many advertisers to lure the crowd. The first justification is the factor of flexibility in buying choice. Nowadays, customers are smart enough to trust their own instincts in the context of the durability and effectiveness of any product. In addition, they understand all the marketing tactics that are designed to befool a buyer. For instance, all the flyer offers are usually planned to trick the customer to initiate them to buy the product.
To conclude, it is often believed by many that gazillion promotions lead to increase sales in shopping by attracting consumers. Although the views on the same vary largely among masses, however, in my opinion, people do follow certain advertised offers during colossal purchases but do not get carried away by all that is presented through advertising platforms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27242524917 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81755781199 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2030959746 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152421353892 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475694378851 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504379778366 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884482843826 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424362097367 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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