Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
In this day and age, rapid development has paved the way for changes occurring in every aspects of human life, including advertising, Some people reckon advertisement can no longer attract them much whilst I am an advocate with the idea that such thing can still affect to consumer’s mindset.
The first and foremost reason why people are prone to ignore some advertisements is due to its tediousness or exaggeration. Some advertisers tend to magnify their products which may make buyers feel unrealistic and suspicious, Therefore, they might skip it without any hesitation. In addition, regarding to people who are not fascinated in that product, then advertising might bother them a lot. For example, the Aba washing powder company is attracting people by advertising through videos that have a very unreal plot. Hence, just a few people in fact purchase that product.
On the other hand, there are some compelling reasons for supporting the second notion. Firstly, according to people who are gullible and naive, they are set to buy products in order to make sure that if the products can meet their expectations or not. If consumers are pleased with the product’s quality, such goods will be shared and become well-known across many countries. Furthermore, the products that are suitable for a range of people can probably gain more profits because consumers may be more trusty and immediately buy it after seeing the advertisement. For instance, Apple company can gain more profits by informing people through advertisements about the new phone with many breakthroughs, thereby potential customers can know thoroughly about the goods.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that advertising can still engage a wide range of consumers. However, the product’s quality needs to be high, otherwise, it can be seriously criticised and ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30272108844 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95593104532 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625850340136 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3600985661 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4615384615 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167291549721 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640989674475 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368062128384 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099053070248 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050858859765 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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