Some people say that all young people should have full-time education until they are 18 years old. To what extent do you disagree or agree?
It's believed that having around-the-clock education is very intrinsic and crucial for young people until they are at the mature age-18 years old. Personally, i totally agree with that statement for some following reasons.
First of all, youth can give the young the best chance to undergo everything in life so studying can make it easy for them to brush up on their social skills like patience and so on. For example, when going to school, we will have an opportunity to get to know and make friends with many people from many parts of the entire country. Therefore, our oral communication skills can be broadened dramatically which can come in useful in our daily life. Moreover, in studying process, it's very essential for us to gain skills in time management to arrange time in rational way. Besides, our creativity can also become wider due to the fact that it is always applied in studying.
The second is that, most young people under the age of 18 have very little real-world experience and have little idea of what career they will pursue; therefore having a full-time education will allow them further opportunity to develop their education and decide upon a suitable career path. In fact, nowadays, many schools provide their students with a large number of lectures, lessons, courses about many aspects in life, which can help them a lot commit valuable knowledge to memory to serve for their dream job in the future.
In short, staying at school until the age of 18 is both fundamental and imperative so the young should take it into account deliberately to take benefit from round-the-clock schooling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...any schools provide their students with a large number of lectures, lessons, courses about many a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in fact, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90875912409 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65366617404 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6115803985 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238604477736 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858347344447 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970992180045 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153618253391 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873037235781 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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