There is no denying the fact that education has more worthwhile in students life in existing time. Although, few individuals consider that some subject viz, music drama and creative writing are more crucial for children. So, they ought to include it in the timetable. I agree with this notion and I will explain my viewpoint in the related to the upcoming paragraphs.
Commencing with the most salient benefit in joyful various subject life music drama, art if involved in the plan. However, it is noticed that it is more worthwhile, the more education. Since they are change of professionals life style today time. Moreover, the government should be embarked every school and cites. Owing to children not only does change their lifestyle, but also they are more become healthier in life. Nowadays they are an introspective person as well as they have more burden due to they are not proper attention on studies. Therefore, they should be few time other activities at the time involved in the timetable.
Furthermore, the ample number of perspective viewpoint why art, writing, drama and creative writing subject more significant for student life. Although, the trend of include recreation subject in the plan list. In fact of reducing stress, due to do enough healing interest in education. For instance, nowadays majority of student do not time more time spent on studies since they feel exhausted, so it is a bad impact on studies. Therefore, parents and teacher should be a few time to give recreation activity. Ergo, it is observed if involve these subject in student timetable, whereas, it is tremendously more important for teenagers life than past.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that art subjects possess and adverse effect on the young owing to their impractical nature and high initial requirements in terms of talent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is more worthwhile, the more education. Since they are change of professionals life s...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ject more significant for student life. Although, the trend of include recreation subjec...
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Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...refore, parents and teacher should be a few time to give recreation activity. Ergo, it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12956810631 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75278390532 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7833054688 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172709272946 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570150071126 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524286173223 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110062981545 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522294457451 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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