Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Other,however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give your opinion .
While some people hold the view that the rate of the society‘s health should be raised by devoting a great deal of Budget for increasing public facilities ,the others highly insist on that mentioned view is not enough efficient solely and it need other complement , this essay will examin both side of debate before arriving at conclusion .
Some people are believed to have enough sport implement can lead the community to the health. First and foremost exercise is the best and cheapest way to achieve to the great physical condition . In fact with exercising human can get a great deal of health with little effort. Athletics could be a ideal example here. Moreover ,if enough sport facilities are accessible , Juvenile will pass their leisure time with these device rather than tempting to commuting crime unintentionally or hazardous activity. Therefore, given the above reasons, sport could be a ideal solution for society’s health.
Despite the above argument ,I am of the view that exercise is not enough efficient solely. Although sport is a significant issue about health and directly associate with this, eating healthy food is too influential . This part of this debate is recommended by dietitians. Fir instance ,The consumption of fast foods, canned foods or junk foods should be banned by the government. Furthermore not only society’s health is related to the physical condition, but also parallel to this issue , mental health is extremely considerable and important. Hence the government should pay attention to boosting spirits and morals in community. A good illustration is , establishing enough entertain centers such as cinema , libraries .
In conclusion , while both side of argument have near opinion , I am highly insist on that health in people‘s bodies include physically and mentally health and sport can not be enough beneficial lonely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37162162162 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92633621513 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.240330459 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239072961366 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708011339083 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674705691266 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155414044918 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426905166793 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.