In today’s rapidly changing globalized world, health of nation has become one of the most controversial questions requiring immediate attention. In the rest of essay, I will proceed to explain why it is so crucial for average human’s health to provide more and more new sport activity. As to my mind, I truly believe that sport in moderation unquestionably has strong positive impact on human living.
While there are a number of way to justify my position, one main argument in this debate is that people in the past did not have such medical problems like curvature of posture or myopia, which associated with sedentary lifestyle. Consequently, we can suppose that they used to have more active lifestyle than we do currently. For example, my grandfather has the similar health problem connected with joints diseases, which many of young people have already now.
A different yet principal reason is that most doctors strongly recommend doing daily sport exercises, even though you actually do not have any serious health problems. Doctors undoubtedly are part of intellectual elite that means that their points of view are authoritative, which you should to believe in. This argument can be strengthen by the following example: my mum used to complain about a pain in her neck. Doctor advised her to do morning exercises every day. After her following of doctor’s recommendations during two days, the pain suddenly disappeared.
On the other hand, there are many opponents who insists that sport is not so effective and you should maintain your well-being via other methods. I leave this argument without merit, because I reckon people who do not want to do anything tend to have this opinion.
To conclude, I am absolutely sure that sport influences our health only in positive way and if you want to live long and health life, sport must became necessary part of yesterday routine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, if, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, i reckon, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10223642173 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83222106857 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623003194888 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6819835793 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.071428571 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169399673623 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526066762268 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379232900175 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957304826592 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300568315549 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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