Some people say that the best way to improve road safety would be to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is the most effective method of increasing road safety. While I consent to this approach, I am more convinced that it is far from the best solution.
To begin with, there is a certain ground to increase the minimum legal driving age in an attempt to enhance road safety. Numerous traffic incidents are the results of young people’s reckless driving behaviour. Their actions are often the product of peer pressure or under the influence of alcohol. Raising the driving age, therefore, can prevent these careless drivers from controlling the wheels and posing threats to others, contributing to the improvement of traffic safety. However, the aforementioned policy is not necessarily the optimal solution.
The government should inflict more severe punishments on traffic violators such as longer prison sentences or higher fines which could act as a deterrent to potential offenders. In other words, if drivers can foresee the severe consequences of their actions, they will be more likely to drive responsibly regardless of their legal driving age. Furthermore, citizens need to undergo more thorough training and extensive tests to ensure a person is physically and mentally fit to operate a vehicle. Age factor, as a result, should only be considered as one among many determinants.
In conclusion, although increasing the legal age for driving can help improve the safety of roads to a certain extent, I believe that its effectiveness pales in comparison with that of some other measures. As members of society, individuals are obliged to drive carefully to protect themselves and other people’s lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35925925926 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9400712924 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4160589727 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286081602244 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902089234664 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971274020308 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180434062329 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663410260177 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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