Some people say that the best way to reduce crime is by using prison sentences.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern society, the constantly increasing number of crimes has a negative effect on people’s lives. While individuals believe that putting offenders in jail is the most effective method to let down crimes, I maintain the opinion that other measures will be more effective.
On the one hand, there are benefits of using prison sentences. The first advantage works as a deterrent to future criminals. One of the greatest human fears is loss of freedom and captivity. Thus, longer prison sentences will be an enormous threat preventing someone from thinking of committing a crime. Another merit is that sending criminals to prison is also a good way to improve the safety of the local community. Because there are crimes committing serious offence such as assault, killing, robbing which are harmful to society. Therefore, will need a long time in prison in order to be sure they can be re-educated not to re-offend.
Despite the above mentioned ideas, I believe that prison is not the best choice to keep crimes. The reason is that it is a waste of money and the budget of the government for their living in jail. Hence, One alternative is using rehabilitation centers to detain them, then Criminals must do community service to give something positive back to society and feed themselves on their own. Furthermore, this helps the government focus its resources on the causes of crime or activities which bring benefits for society., which would lead to less crime in the future.
In conclusion, while many claim that sending crimes to jail is the best way to reduce future criminals and to ensure the peace of society, it seems to me that the government should use any methods like using rehabilitation centers which help the budget concentrate on finding the causes of crime to less crime in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9606557377 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69310685075 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.070173425 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20095529911 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598206396132 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524165734857 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114908781704 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494055309299 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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