Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have negative effect on young people's writing and reading skills. Do you agree or disagree?
In modern lifes, everyone will use computers and mobile phones. In life, mobile phones and computers have a great impact on us. My life and study are all around it. It has provided me with great help. I think cell phones and computers are very helpful to our life, but there are also many disadvantages.
First of all, computers shorten the distance between me and my friends. I remember when I was in primary school, my mother told me that when they went to school, the development of computers not so convenient, and it would take a long time to chat. Now, due to the development of computer technology, we can quickly find our friends to chat on the computer or mobile phone. Whenever I want to go out to play with my classmates, we can make an appointment on the Internet, I think it’s very convenient.
In the other hand, computers have many disadvantages, such as young people more through the network to maintain real social life. In real life, the interaction becomes less and people don't like going out. Because most people rely on computers to keep information. Once encountering hackers, privacy is easy to expose, and the emergence of computers makes people mostly sit in front of computers to work, which is prone to health problems. If you often look at the computer, your eyesight will drop and your neck will ache easily.
To sum up, computers are good for us, but also bad for us, so we should pay attention to the harm of computers and mobile phones to us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, i think, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62878787879 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60256769093 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0203993116 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209481768685 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735027090394 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515043655837 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119964009952 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686920831802 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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