Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means other believe that these games are contributing to children development . Now discuss both views and opinion.
With the rise in modernisation a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in jungles to take first steps on the moon. Nevertheless they have some isuess which remains irevocable and as complex as ever.For instance, that given topic asserts that kids activities have be shifted from outdoor to indoor games to specific screen ,and through this essay, I shall explore the dimensional of this topic through examples and assumption and shape my opinion the end.
Taking one side of the argument, there are people who believe that playing video games improve the hand eye co- ordination because in childhood period every child wanted to win the match so, they did do more practise.when any child did more practise then they improve many skills like concentration, eye contact, and interest in any work so on. Furthermore, any child can easily achieve sucess because their mental power improves due do use of different games . The best epitome of this would be school student because school student are mostly participate in indoor , and outdoor games, and they improve their concentration so, easily top in their class.
On the flip side, there are antagonists to this assertion who believe that student misslet less time in activity such as homework , reading and sports activity because all time play indoor games . So, they not give more times in study , and more students fail in their exam. However , they suffer many harmfull disease like weak eye sight, insomnia etc.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that there is no single conclusion,still, I take this ground that on effective clap requires the use of hands so children to mange the time table ,and in study times do study , and in game times plays games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06825938567 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66470552886 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.635276587 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.5 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111978623036 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372993971215 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402475750695 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700129825426 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228848059212 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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