Some people say that computer have made life easier and more convenint. Other people say That computer have made life more complexity and stressful. What is your opinion and reasons and examples to support.
Mankind has become dependent on plethora of technogadgets and media source that how become the founder stone of the modern world. Therefore some citizens reckon that life is easier and more convenint with the assist of computer but other say that gadgets have made life more difficult and stressful. My inclination towards the former statement and which I explicit in the subsequent paragraph.
Now deep diving into the facts, The pivotal factor behind this static topic of discussion is technology. Due to the advancements, a wide array of gadgets and smartphone are part and parcel of modern lifestyle. Firstly and formost reason of computer is the best source of providing knowledge and information regarding academic field or a projects.Similarly computer can also help youngster to learn about new concept and gain knowledge which can help them to improve their skills. With the new skills they can achieve better results and increase the rate of academic field. For instance, modern school education are on computer basis, so students have no oppurtunity to learn mathematics skills even substraction and divison they cannot count without a computer. Secondly computer have also benefitial for high productivity in both academic and professional field. For example machines saves precious time and effort in every field which has made possible for people to develop exponentially.
Moving forth, on the flip side, The adverse repercussions of computer have made life more difficult and stressful. Primarily people become accustomed to a passive lifestyle and minimize their physical activities. Moreover children are also addicted of gaming zones, they either spend too much time on computer and wastage precious time, which make them vulnerable to a host of ailments are obesity, cardio vascular issues, eye sight weakness etecetra. For instance according to the report of uk survey which had conducted that 65% of the teenagers are affected by computer, which in turn leads to health issues. Secondary all technologies need a source of power and energy for using gadgets. Similarly all the time has raised the demand for energy generally. Therefore it affection ecological resource and become sacrifice to development and contamious by the overuse of electronic equipments.
I personally opine that computer is the most wonderful gift of our life.
To encapsulate, life is a combination of good and bad choice a person makes. If the pros and cons of anything are weighted rightfully then mankind can be led to a bountiful future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33250620347 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87308482843 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593052109181 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1741243463 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.45 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.15 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280578433173 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734566556657 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128996746827 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150158774124 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979580684429 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.