Owing to globalization,technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds, providing us new avenues while keeping update ourselves with latest news and current affairs.Individuals are more inclined to use e-books and latest gadgets as per modern trend.Although,some folks vehemently believe that this trend will completely replace the traditional way of reading like newspaper, magazines and novels.The idea does seems plausible.According to me,the evidence put forward by proponents on this viewpoint is unconvincing and inherently flawed.I am fundamentally opposed with the given statement.
There is ample, powerful and daily evidence that majority of people prefer to read traditional newspaper or other books to concentrate on their reading and for the relaxation of the mind which they may not get while using technical gadgets.Moreover, electronic display emits radiation waves which really leads hazardous impact on their health and increase the chances of several chronic disease such as, migraine,headache and lack of visibility.To exemplify,One of my friend is suffering from migraine problem as he used to study online with electronical gadgets.Furthermore,these gadgets need infrastructure and maintenance costs which would not affordable for everyone and middle class people.
on the second hand, other people hold the notion,eBooks have some benefits which are highly appreciable.People not need to carry any books or newspaper while travelling or outside.They can easily enjoy the reading by using several eBooks applications in their mobile phones and tabs.In addition,this trend also offer numerous facilities.To illustrate,Individuals may store thousands of novel and articles in eBooks and, they can easily translate the content in any other language as per their own preference.A survey conducted by times of India demonstrated that 65 percent of young generation are addicted to read on screen rather than printed pages.
After contemplating the subjected matter, I can conclude my vision,types of ways to read has been enormously changed due to the huge advancement of technology in the past few decades.eBooks may provide the chances of versatile development, but in sharp contrast, traditional way of reading would be convenient and relaxing approach for all the civilians.It is predicted that its flexibility and sophistication will improve in the foreseeable future.
- The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U S state of Oregon Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 83
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable place to attract and entertain young people Other think that purpose of museums is to educate not to entertain Discuss both views and give your own opinion 60
- School should not force children to learn a foreign language To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- More people than ever before travel to other countries than ever before Why this has happened Is this a positive development or negative 87
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , technology
Owing to globalization,technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds, pro...
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Suggestion: with the latest
... avenues while keeping update ourselves with latest news and current affairs.Individuals ar...
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Suggestion: Individuals
...es with latest news and current affairs.Individuals are more inclined to use e-books and la...
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Suggestion: Although
... and latest gadgets as per modern trend.Although,some folks vehemently believe that this...
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...est gadgets as per modern trend.Although,some folks vehemently believe that this tren...
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...ng like newspaper, magazines and novels.The idea does seems plausible.According to ...
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...nd novels.The idea does seems plausible.According to me,the evidence put forward by propo...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...nd novels.The idea does seems plausible.According to me,the evidence put forward by proponents ...
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...t is unconvincing and inherently flawed.I am fundamentally opposed with the given...
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Suggestion:
...ooks to concentrate on their reading and for the relaxation of the mind which the...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...y not get while using technical gadgets.Moreover, electronic display emits radiation wav...
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Suggestion: , headache
...everal chronic disease such as, migraine,headache and lack of visibility.To exemplify,One...
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Suggestion: To
...igraine,headache and lack of visibility.To exemplify,One of my friend is suffering...
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Suggestion: , One
...ache and lack of visibility.To exemplify,One of my friend is suffering from migraine...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
... study online with electronical gadgets.Furthermore,these gadgets need infrastructure and m...
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Suggestion: , these
...ne with electronical gadgets.Furthermore,these gadgets need infrastructure and mainten...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...or everyone and middle class people. on the second hand, other people hold the ...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , eBooks
...econd hand, other people hold the notion,eBooks have some benefits which are highly app...
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Suggestion: People
...e benefits which are highly appreciable.People not need to carry any books or newspape...
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Suggestion: They
...r newspaper while travelling or outside.They can easily enjoy the reading by using s...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...cations in their mobile phones and tabs.In addition,this trend also offer numerous...
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Suggestion: , this
...their mobile phones and tabs.In addition,this trend also offer numerous facilities.To...
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Suggestion: To
...is trend also offer numerous facilities.To illustrate,Individuals may store thousa...
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Suggestion: , Individuals
... offer numerous facilities.To illustrate,Individuals may store thousands of novel and articl...
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...store thousands of novel and articles in eBooks and, they can easily translate th...
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Suggestion: A
...er language as per their own preference.A survey conducted by times of India demo...
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Suggestion: , types
...bjected matter, I can conclude my vision,types of ways to read has been enormously cha...
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Suggestion: It
...relaxing approach for all the civilians.It is predicted that its flexibility and s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.81212244701 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 87.0 20.2975951904 429% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3086276825 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 512.5 106.682146367 480% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 87.5 20.7667163134 421% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06120827912 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114494099737 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639092173147 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0157661790193 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639092173147 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157661790193 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.9 13.0946893788 381% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -33.75 50.2224549098 -67% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 7.44779559118 297% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 11.3001002004 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.89 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.37 8.58950901804 156% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.8 10.1190380762 364% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , technology
Owing to globalization,technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds, pro...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... avenues while keeping update ourselves with latest news and current affairs.Individuals ar...
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Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Individuals
...es with latest news and current affairs.Individuals are more inclined to use e-books and la...
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Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... and latest gadgets as per modern trend.Although,some folks vehemently believe that this...
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Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...est gadgets as per modern trend.Although,some folks vehemently believe that this tren...
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Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ng like newspaper, magazines and novels.The idea does seems plausible.According to ...
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Line 1, column 425, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...nd novels.The idea does seems plausible.According to me,the evidence put forward by propo...
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Line 1, column 425, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...nd novels.The idea does seems plausible.According to me,the evidence put forward by proponents ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...dea does seems plausible.According to me,the evidence put forward by proponents on t...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...t is unconvincing and inherently flawed.I am fundamentally opposed with the given...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ooks to concentrate on their reading and for the relaxation of the mind which the...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...y not get while using technical gadgets.Moreover, electronic display emits radiation wav...
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Suggestion: , headache
...everal chronic disease such as, migraine,headache and lack of visibility.To exemplify,One...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...igraine,headache and lack of visibility.To exemplify,One of my friend is suffering...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , One
...ache and lack of visibility.To exemplify,One of my friend is suffering from migraine...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... study online with electronical gadgets.Furthermore,these gadgets need infrastructure and m...
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Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
...ne with electronical gadgets.Furthermore,these gadgets need infrastructure and mainten...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...or everyone and middle class people. on the second hand, other people hold the ...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , eBooks
...econd hand, other people hold the notion,eBooks have some benefits which are highly app...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...e benefits which are highly appreciable.People not need to carry any books or newspape...
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Suggestion: They
...r newspaper while travelling or outside.They can easily enjoy the reading by using s...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...cations in their mobile phones and tabs.In addition,this trend also offer numerous...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...their mobile phones and tabs.In addition,this trend also offer numerous facilities.To...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...is trend also offer numerous facilities.To illustrate,Individuals may store thousa...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , Individuals
... offer numerous facilities.To illustrate,Individuals may store thousands of novel and articl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...store thousands of novel and articles in eBooks and, they can easily translate th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...er language as per their own preference.A survey conducted by times of India demo...
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Suggestion: , types
...bjected matter, I can conclude my vision,types of ways to read has been enormously cha...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...relaxing approach for all the civilians.It is predicted that its flexibility and s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.81212244701 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 87.0 20.2975951904 429% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3086276825 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 512.5 106.682146367 480% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 87.5 20.7667163134 421% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06120827912 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114494099737 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639092173147 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0157661790193 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639092173147 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157661790193 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.9 13.0946893788 381% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -33.75 50.2224549098 -67% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 7.44779559118 297% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 11.3001002004 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.89 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.37 8.58950901804 156% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.8 10.1190380762 364% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.