*Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magzines to what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the advanced era the modern technology has took control over all the activities and had maded lives more simpler and luxurious. Some people believe that e books will lead to the extinction of the newspapers and the magazines. I partially agrees the statement and will discuss my views in the upcoming paragraphs.
To start with, from the ancient times newspapers and be magazines are the richest source of information. Past From the decade, The development in the sources of knowledge has shown a vast increase. E books, pdfs are the new mean of information gathering. Apart from the extinction of newspapers, this technology will snatches the jobs of the newspaper and magazines printers. The number of employees working in the gathering information and printing the data will be jobless. Secondly, the old age people who donot have much knowledge of technology will not be able to read news.
On the other hand, this change will lead to the development in the daily routines. People having a busy schedule ,who donot have time to read the newspaper Can have ebooks in their devices and can have a look when ever they get time. Secondly, it will interect teanagers more towards the news. Students nowadays, prefer technology more rather than the paperwork, in that case it will interect teanagers more towards news and will make them habitual of reading books.
In the conclusion, though every thing in the universe has its pros and cons. Similarly thr advancement in the technology shows demerits parallel to the merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
... advanced era the modern technology has took control over all the activities and had...
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Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
... all the activities and had maded lives more simpler and luxurious. Some people believe that...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...wspapers and the magazines. I partially agrees the statement and will discuss my views...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'snatch'
Suggestion: snatch
...ion of newspapers, this technology will snatches the jobs of the newspaper and magazines...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble to read news. On the other hand, this change will lead to the development...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... routines. People having a busy schedule ,who donot have time to read the newspape...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore towards the news. Students nowadays, prefer technology more rather than the p...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... in the universe has its pros and cons. Similarly thr advancement in the technology shows...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, secondly, similarly, so, apart from, as to, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01960784314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69408054317 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7932171463 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191356380265 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631670205526 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606592019769 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113895205847 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697765908356 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.