Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
With the advancement of technology people can easily do anything in short span of time and they can get knowledge. Nowadays , technology act as a panacea. Technology helps from manifold ways and people can easily save their time in every sector such as business and so on. Some people think that technology is solution of everything while others contradict it. Therefore , I am going to discuss my views over this statement.
To begin with, there are many advantages of technology. Firstly , technology helps to student in manifold ways such as student can easily carry electronic book on their mobile phone rather than notebooks and student can easily quest anything , in which they feel difficult and technology gives all solution about any question. Secondly, technology resort to in business field as well as in booking of any thing such as hotels , shopping and many more. For instance, if people go somewhere, as a result technology helps to book a hotels and if people have no time, hence they can do shopping about all things such as clothes,groceries and many more from websites ,which is create by technology.
On the Other hand , every situation has two aspects, negative and positive, which is similar in this case. there are many disadvantages of technology on human’s life. Firstly, Some people rely on technology ,due to which they forgot how to talk with older people and they do not give respect to someone, which is very wrong. Secondly, most of the student reliance on technology, correspondingly they do not give focus on their study and they are forgetting manners and their tradition , which is very bad thing.
To conclude, people should use technology in an optimum way. Children should focus on their study rather than use of technology because if children use of technology in early age ,which can fatal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0131147541 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7770378288 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518032786885 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9223785979 49.2860985944 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06452816374 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162775888761 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640022744419 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411161652376 0.0662205650399 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108116576487 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197060429336 0.0443174109184 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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