Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
With the advent of technology, methods of usage of materials which is used daily changed. For instance, people can achieve their books by way of E-books whenever they want. Besides they can reach up to date information rapidly. Reaching up to date information may cause a knowledge consumption. In my opinion, E-books and modern technology help us to reach a knowledge by way of rapidly and without any effort.
To embark on, there are multiple reasons why modern getting new is very popular. First of all, many students carry their books in their laptop or tablet as an E-book format against they physically carry it in their schoolbag. Moreover, they can reach their books whenever they want and share with class fellow. Secondly, people can access ongoing news by their phone or computers before the newspaper. Furthermore, reaching the information with one click or one touch attract to people. They can get a news against they go to the shop to buy a traditional newspaper. Consequently, if human being can reach an information with easy method, they adopt themself rapidly.
However, reaching information rapidly is not always good because hot news should always be corrected by officials. For instance, fake news may send out rapidly than original news. As a result of this, the fake news might help to reveal the chaos on the grounds that source of original news is not be able to verify.
To sum up, even if modern technology change our lifestyle evidently, these changes will carry our ages to another step. In my opinion, even if there are some side effects, it is a big revolution for our age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...s by way of E-books whenever they want. Besides they can reach up to date information r...
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Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
... and modern technology help us to reach a knowledge by way of rapidly and without any effor...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ongoing news by their phone or computers before the newspaper. Furthermore, reach...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...e touch attract to people. They can get a news against they go to the shop to buy a tr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the grounds that source of original news is not be able to verify. To sum up, ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89416058394 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60464559949 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1223811709 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8823529412 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0555589343176 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0196273809835 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263648847455 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0381024010695 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029631157528 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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