Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is often believed by some that advancements in communication media may lead to the removal of newspapers and magazines. I disagree with the statement because there are people who still rely on newspapers and magazines and many programs come in handy for the lovers of real paper readers.
On the one hand, Ebooks and other online sites are escalating rapidly among youngsters and school children. This might be thought that paper readers may extinct over the years. Online news and magazines are indeed convenient, flexible and easy to use at a fingertip distance.
For instance, many sites and media update the news regularly and instantly with live locations and persons. Similarly, people could buy Ebooks, and magazines online as a result, they would not faint, lose or be misused by others. Therefore it is a growing trend among online lovers and may lead to the minimal removal of paper and printed books.
On the other hand, newspapers and magazines are also would be a major part of the readers. Firstly, reading news in a paper is also a habit of many because it often provides freshness, and is simple for the eyes, and the brains. For instance, constant reading online may lead to eye problems Ns headaches. Secondly, schools and colleges are conducting readers week and some organisations give books from the library to boost the reading habits of children. Such programs enhance direct book readings instead of high-cost Ebooks and magazine buyers. Furthermore, paper books and newspapers are cost-effective and flexible for all age groups. For example, many news sites are expensive for subscriptions, and still, some people are unaware or not interests in online readings.
To sum up, it is an ever-growing trend in online and Ebook news and magazine readings. Nevertheless, such channels would not be able to remove the old conventional newspapers and monthly journals due to the extensive advantages of papers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ot faint, lose or be misused by others. Therefore it is a growing trend among online love...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12302839117 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76813116197 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520504731861 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4010329914 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5294117647 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1764705882 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123465000507 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430700301235 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357272867674 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771955556688 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388461485536 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.