Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal offence. While other say that they should be free to make noise without limitation.
It argued that making excess noise should be categorised as a criminal offense, whilst others perceive that people should be permitted to make any noise they want. This essay will discuss both of the arguments and state my own opinion.
The most obvious logic of making noise pollution a punishable offence is the adverse effect it has on put health. it is responsible for anxiety, sleep deprivation and other chronic diseases. Apparently, these problems may not look like a serious health concern, but these health conditions are the onset of many other diseases. In other words, these tolerable health issues of today may bring more serious health problems tomorrow. Furthermore, the effect of sound is more acute for infants and elderly people, because they are physically incapable of withstanding excessive noise. For example, a recent research revealed that excess noise, especially in big cities are responsible for numerous types of health issues at later part of our lives. This example exemplifies that noise has a long term effect on our health. Therefore, when something is directly impacting our lives should be prevented at any cost.
On the other hand, it is true that noise is not good for our health, but we cannot ignore the fact that we cannot live our lives noise free. That is to say that if we try to eliminate sound totally from our lives, that would not be possible. For instance, horns of the cars are a major sound polluter; it will not be possible to make it a punishable offence, because for most developing countries do not follow traffic rules properly, and using horn unavoidable. Thus, seemingly it looks like we cannot make this as a criminal offense without creating a clear cut solution for the problem.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that noise cannot be eradicated because we do not have a straight forward solution for this. However, as this issue is related to our health, it should be a criminal offense. It may not give us a complete solution, but it will surely bring the effect down.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, it is true, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90724637681 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59228979738 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527536231884 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4196655821 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5882352941 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304231676186 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954554195121 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11434957852 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220241585941 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112708959712 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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