Some people say that government should invest in trains and the subway system to prevent traffic congestion in large cities.others,however, think that it should built wider roads.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Transportation modes have shrunk this world into a global village. Presently, a massive number of people ponder that the widespread availability of trains and the subway system could be useful to curtail the number of grid locks. Therefore, it is essential for the administration to invest on these. By contrast, others assert that extensive roads should be constructed to control traffic. Here, i would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support up former view.First and foremost, trains and subway system could be lucrative to restrain the traffic congestion. For instance, people are expected to use trains as it is the cheapest and fastest way to travel instead of using their private vehicles. Thus, the number of cars or motorbikes will be reduced on roads and traffic jams are likely to be controlled. What is more, subway system will find more space underground to built the railway tracks. As a result, the availability of more space on ground is likely to be controlled. On the contrary, others have conflicting views.
Numerous points can be mentioned to support the latter view. Initially, wider roads could be helpful in the reduction of accidents which prompts to traffic jams. Thus, it will radically decline the number of jams. Moreover, the pave and extensive roads could be fruitful to overcome the traffic congestion. To demonstrate, large number of vehicles will pass through the cities easily if the roads have ample space. Thence, the chance of grid locks is expected to be plunged.
From my notion, evey sword has its two edges. Undeniably, wider roads could be a worthwhile solution. However, the trains and subway are also a reliable solution to decline the traffic congestion. The government authorities should not only construct the wider roads but also spend some of the expense on the trains and subway system to control traffic.
To recapitulate, traffic is getting on the nerves of the people. Therefore, government should take some remedial measure to control the number of traffic jams.
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Essay evaluation report
people are expected to use trains as it is the cheapest ...
people are expected to use trains as they are the cheapest ...
Sentence: From my notion, evey sword has its two edges.
Error: evey Suggestion: ever
flaws:
1. need more complex or compound sentences
2. transition words are over used
3. remove the pattern behind and have your own writing styles.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 340 350
No. of Characters: 1683 1500
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.294 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.95 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.602 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.783 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.725 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.565 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.282 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.476 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e constructed to control traffic. Here, i would like to account for both sides wi...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...nifold points to support up former view.First and foremost, trains and subway system ...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y decline the number of jams. Moreover, the pave and extensive roads could be fruitful t...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...onstruct the wider roads but also spend some of the expense on the trains and subway system...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, as a result, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16519174041 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74317568429 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516224188791 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0978797937 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1304347826 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7391304348 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210351756801 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591919861642 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655179039875 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135819633984 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572679114346 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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