It seems consensus nowadays that it is highly privileged to provide healthy food to the citizens by the food authorities but some people presume that to impose heavy tax on junk food because it would certainly enhance the preference of consumers toward consuming healthy food. In this essay, I would intend to enunciate this view in the upcoming paragraphs.
Admittedly, the potential methods of enhancing the consumption rate of nutritious food by individuals, are manifold but for the stand point of some experts, the significant way is to levy taxes on unhealthy food, is the best. It certainly inhibits the interest of the people to spend money on such kinds of food. As a result, numerous people will prefer to buy the food, which would be healthy.For instance, in China, government increased the price of junk food and provided the meal, which was full of nutrients to the citizens in the year 2000.As a consequence, people were more likely to purchase healthy food.
Alternatively, government ought to make an effort to inculcate awareness among people to choose healthy food for consumption by providing it at the cheap rate.Since, most of the people loath to purchase unhealthy food due to the high prices of nutritious food. If authorities provide such kind of food to the individuals at the subsidize rate then it would surely appeal the consumers to take food, which is full of nutrients.
In final words, needless to say that to consume healthy food by the people is good for health and they can be secured from multiple health issues by consuming it. To put heavy taxes on the junk food by the government is also not a bad idea to enforce the individuals for taking nutritious meal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90311418685 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75810455188 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512110726644 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9975147907 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.444444444 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1111111111 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339152528542 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14616877752 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738014453629 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222299226079 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273707354564 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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