Some people say that gun weapon must be legal for protecting their selves whereas other people reject it. Which one you agree or disagree and give the reasons.
Whether global citizens should use guns and other weapons as a practical way to protect them from criminals or accidents has been a major topic of concern in modern society. While some inhabitants may argue that people should not utilize guns and weapons, I strongly believe the opposite opinion in virtue of some valid reasons.
On the one hand, using guns and weapons could be treacherous in some certain circumstances. Sometimes, they may bring about many fierce wars, and, for the people who do not gain enough profound knowledge of the right way to make full use of those armed forces, it would be more hazardous for the security of many citizens and soon, pose a severe threat to the society at large. For example, there were a variety of events where a large number of innocent people were shot accidentally throughout the war period.
On the other hand, as a efficient way to self-defense, the usage of those weapons and guns is considered normal and comprehensible, especially under today’s context of globalization and international integration, inhabitants around the globe gradually have the autonomy to make the most of armed forces to protect themselves from many unexpected accidents and prevent an abundance of would-be criminals. There were many times when the police could use guns as a deterrent for the terrorists so as to bar them from doing the wrong things.
From the issues outlined above, one may conclude that whereas a variety of people may think that the use of guns and weapons should be prohibited, I would be the one who advocate the idea of making use of those wisely and accurately in order to create a secure and well-educated society going forwards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...e, there were a variety of events where a large number of innocent people were shot accidentally ...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the war period. On the other hand, as a efficient way to self-defense, the usag...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... guns as a deterrent for the terrorists so as to bar them from doing the wrong things. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78717548492 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.245721182 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.25 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.625 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236101960263 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109613909173 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444609690449 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149047160292 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329748306427 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.