Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other
people think hat in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are
more important than History
It is thought by someone that history will be a more prominent part of school life however others feel that the nowadays trends are changing by the looking vast improvement in technology and science and preferring technology subjects than history. In this essay will examine both sides of the argument and provide an overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there is a wide range of reason why people like history subject apart from other subjects because it will give an overview of our histories like about freedom fighters and kings. Perhaps the main reason is that the history is an interesting subject like it is kind of storybooks however some people don't like to know about the past things and they might have thought their no point of learning all the date and years of history. History will define present things like the route of the country or represent the history of the country. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi is one of the freedom fighters who gave a India freedom from British through peacefully and he is also called as "God father of India". Reading about history will give pleasure, that we were born in that nation where we have a great history.
On the other hand, day to day technology is improving rather learning old things, need to update the new things which will be exciting to some people where they do like and see their future depend on that. Science and technology will give pleasure when we find new things and everyone can try to achieve new things. Future is depending upon the science and improvement of technology which will take them at huge level rather than focusing past history it is better to focus innovations. For instance, the metro train is one of the technology, which we can travel in a few minutes to reach a destination.
To conclude, both archaic subjects and science subject are topics which are very relevant to modern society. Overall, I would have to say that both science and technology will be needed to enhance past and present interest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: The proper name in singular (God) must be used with a third-person verb: 'fathers'.
Suggestion: fathers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, apart from, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86994219653 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4666796177 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514450867052 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.75304805 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.615384615 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239004109566 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878386022383 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564270700464 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142864720038 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301264492628 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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