Today's world demand Science and technology and it's a vast and growing fields in this era but Some people argue that history play a very important role in our life and it is a most significant school subjects, while other think that technology and science are more crucial than history. I believe, in this modern world science and technology subjects play a vital role in our daily life.
On the one hand, note doubt, in the past era history was most important subjects in school because on that time technology did not invented and nor the science was much popular. Furthermore, many people was interested on history and people given huge respect to those person who has good in history knowledge. For instance, in 16 and 18 century the governments gave them a good position when anyone was good in history because they gave a good suggestion to governments such as about past and future. Thereafter, governments took decision on the base on their suggestions.
On the other hand, in the modern world and the advancement of science and technology these subjects is extremely important today's era because science and technology helps you in every sectors such as history, law, business, weather prediction, climates change and health sectors. For example, in the pandemic situation likewise, in Coivd-19 technology play a vital role in our life and every sectors and the business was running due to technology. However, medical science invent the vaccine to protect from covid-19 and enhance our immune system. My opinion, is that technology and science is vast and major subject by using science and technology the we can do anything which we want we can invent new thing for environments and even though we can learn and read history by using internet we should not read and the whole books and remember it.
To conclude, I think in this era science and technology is most significant subjects and this filed is moving forward and help in our daily life rather than history. History subjects was merely famous in past era but now everyone using history through technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...world demand Science and technology and its a vast and growing fields in this era b...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'invent'
Suggestion: invent
...because on that time technology did not invented and nor the science was much popular. F...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
...istory and people given huge respect to those person who has good in history knowledge. For ...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...y these subjects is extremely important todays era because science and technology hel...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...important todays era because science and technology helps you in every sectors su...
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Line 5, column 651, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
...subject by using science and technology the we can do anything which we want we can in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95714285714 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59262533399 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488571428571 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6916258395 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366250743099 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133797752066 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104293912617 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236242427335 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697237130264 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.