No matter how marvelous progresses triggered by scientific and technological disciplines are, the value of historical curriculums shall never be ignored. My firm conviction is that history deserves more attention regardless of what fields or majors are people focusing on.
To start from, advocates on science and technology are prone to consider those subjects are the future tendency of human development as well as the huge blessing of human beings , promoting us to conquer all the existing and future encountered hardships, which play an indispensable role in every aspect of our society. For example, it is no longer a challenge for people to explore the outer space, through satellites and space shuttle, to realise the dreams used to be impossible. Besides, researches from biology and agriculture have well fed up the majority of the population with a huge boost in the production of food. Furthermore, more and more new medicines have been designed to facilitate patients to extend their life spans, accompanied with reducing pain aroused from diseases, promoting them to recover to the perfect conditions.
Although the above triumphs are belonging to dedications of curriculums about science and technology, it doesnot mean history is useless. On the one hand, the success of travelling to the universe are originated from accumulations of many generations rather than breaking out all of sudden well recorded in history. So does the harvest in crops to feed people and innovated drugs to cure diseases. That is why history is vital.
On the other hand, history is everywhere around us, whereas it tend to be taken for granted ,for it is so common and easy. For example, aspirin is one of popular tablets to cure any disease ranging from cold to high blood pressure, or even some cancers. Few people ever reconginise it originally from the essence of willow leaves listed in ancient medical books thousands of years ago. On top of that, any freshman are required to learn from former ones' experiences and knowledge or to follow certain rules. Those are another demonstration of history. Moreover, when it come to practical works, people are more inclined to select old ways, in case of any risk, especially for doctors. Thus , it is no wonder aspirin is claimed as skeleton key for them.
In conclusion, without history, we would not have succeeded in an shortcut. Otherwise, longer time and more failure would have been as the cost in the advancing journey for all man kind , even if more science and technology were armed.
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- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, even so, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11990407674 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81686993591 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0038032533 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.368421053 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154245556104 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444841507066 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229994913954 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848627816195 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018383919224 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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