Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In these days, internet plays an important roles in the every society as well as in the whole world.In this regard, many people clam that the internet helps people to provide a beneficial information however other think that because of wide information it can creates a problems.As far as it concerns to me ,I completely agree with the second statement.This essay highlights what sorts of problem can be created because of getting details more than enough.
To begain with, there could be various reason because of getting extra knowledge highly.Among them one could be problem in student studies .In internet some times people create fake information because of which while studing student gets a wrong education which create in student future.Simillarly because of access to much information people be over confident which is a problem in itself.To justify it with an example,according to the research of 2019 in U.S.A it was found that because of getting wrong data from internet around 32%of student were failed in their exams.Therefore because of access lots of information can bring problem in student studies and makes people over confident in wrong place.
Likewise second reason could be hacking of the device.while getting information our device will we conneted with others the link created by others because of whic our all personal saved details can be hacked.Likewise because of too much access of information people can be scam.To clearify it with an
example,according to the research of 2016 in China it was found that around 31%of people get scam while getting information from unknown sources.Thus because of getting unwanted information people can get scam and hacked too.
All in all because of getting excess of information from internet student can create problem in their studies,it can make people over confidence and it may hacked and scam with people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23432343234 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93734193605 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475247524752 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.497166645 49.4020404114 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 396.5 106.682146367 372% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.75 20.7667163134 365% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312926047279 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217530624461 0.084324248473 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347385257868 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196415733913 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534758521016 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.1 13.0946893788 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.65 50.2224549098 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.24 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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