Some people say it is the government’s responsibility to fund school buses, while others think parents should be responsible for bringing their kids to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, compared to the past, parents opt for school which is located sometimes far away from the child house. Thus, there is the actual question of a child in the and it requests a consideration.
It is claimed that the authority should subsidise school vehicles, while others believe that the delivering duty should be included in family commitments. From my perspective, certainly, parents should be obligated to assume this responsibility, since it is challenging to adjust to a bus schedule, nevertheless, this solution reaps advantages and drawbacks .
There is no doubts that an adult person build a life and this process requires to make enormous efforts in order to reach the goal . Adult life is filled with unpleasant events, responsibilities , detrimental occasions, thereby, parents strive to ensure a happy childhood for their children, they struggle to protect their toddles from responsibilities in childhood, because they realize that their youngsters will have them in the future. However, adjusting to a bus timetable adds the responsibility to a child, since a child should be punctual, this child should be in a right place at the right time. By delivering their youngsters to the school , parents facilitate children's responsibilities, making them a little bit happy .
It is undeniable that if the government will be a sponsor of school buses, financial expenditure is necessary. In my opinion, it will be more beneficial to fund other school necessities, for instance, refurbishing school building or funding famous castle jouney .
It is wort remarking that the offered proposition has disadvantages, since major cities have adverse issues , such as traffic congestions , air pollution. When every parents use the public transport or a private vehicle in the purpose of getting school, the city problems will boost considerably.
In conclusion, certainly, parents could choose more , convenient ways to commute a school, delivering their offsprings, they simplify child's responsibilities, improving their childhood. But, this approach reinforces horrible issues of cities, giving to rise some activity for the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57798165138 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27110277715 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6153252292 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307041037063 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965570406512 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066916091181 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144346025282 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702465937521 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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