The term "successful person" is relevant since a person could be considered as a high achiever compare to someone, however, this person did not acquire the enormous outcome compare to another person. A person pursues a goal and when it reached , a new challenge will pose in life, soul satisfaction and satisfaction of material needs are unlimited, hence, it is challenging to understand you are succeeded or not. Numerous individuals reflect about achieving success, attaching importance to this question . It is considered that parents exert an impact on adult success. From my perspective, parents, in reality, assist in shaping character traits, however, talent and around others are additional serious influential reasons of it.
It seems undeniable toddlers depend on parents because they are not able to live independently, so they are imposed to obey the parent's rules. In addition, parents are obligated to assume parental duties, so the result of interaction between parents and their offspring is impossible to escape. Children adjust to living environments in the family which is created by parents who are the active participators in the forming process of human personality. The basic human values, such as honesty, kindness, conscience, build up due to relatives and these reverberate in adulthood in personal success. For instance, a person who is persistent, stubborn, and makes a lot of efforts in the exam preparation , consequently, this person will succeed in the aim. Moreover, parents strive to ensure the proper financial circumstance for members. It is obvious that financial status of the family is essential , a wealthy family can give more benefits for their youngsters rather than a poor relative, for example, they can pay for a private tutor who will reinforce a cognitive process or their pupil can attend an advanced school with a high-qualified teaching staff. Therefore, spiritual qualities which are shaped by relatives are the basis for achievements, financial status of the family is crucial in contributing
There is no doubts that friends, acquaintances also play significant roles, encouraging young in a variety of activities. For instance , if your friend has passed the international exam and has been studying at the famous university, you would aim to be the same high achiever as the friend. Nevertheless, I would like to mention about one drawback, compared to three decades ago,nowadays our lives are more mobile, people prefer to opt protected lives and to avoid a face to face communication with close people, resulting in an increase in the spreading disease, such as depression, which decreases an opportunity to be successful. On the other hand, social media aids to enhance opportunities to be reach more beneficial life due to installing connections with international acquaintances. As a result, people who around child cause an efficient approach to success.
In conclusion, personal characteristics are the basis of a high achiever which are shaped by parents who are also responsible for family well-being , closed people , close friends are not less important in life results.
- Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell Do you agree or disagree Include relevant examples from your own experience 83
- Some people say it is the government’s responsibility to fund school buses, while others think parents should be responsible for bringing their kids to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- There is certainly a difference in thoughts ideas and actions between children their parents and grandparents Why do these differences exist Does it cause problems in your community in your opinion 95
- Nowadays many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter 74
- It is necessery for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree? 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2652.0 1615.20841683 164% => OK
No of words: 492.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17218200989 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575203252033 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 841.5 506.74238477 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4556879651 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.333333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153295728776 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519350631952 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432964420334 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086762043147 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174916294035 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 162.0 78.4519038076 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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