it is opined that in medical field, the experiments on the wild animals are essential for people. On the other hand some individuals consider it wrong task.Before reaching to an appropriate conclusion both sides will be discussed.
There are numerous reasons that support this side.
To begin with ,The drugs are the most crucial element in human life.Without proper investigation it can not be given to patients.
In health care sector ,it is compulsory for new doctors to operate the pets and check the results . Other wise it may take life of someone.
There was serious case against one company that launched dose for children without checking affects.
secondly ,There are new students learn their lessons by such things
In India all new medical students learn surgery techniques by doing research on frogs.
However ,it has negative side too.
Firstly,It is cruelty to use animals for their own benefits. Like human beings these small creatures have also feelings .
There are some books on humanity that show the injustice against animals.
Father of India ,MK Gandhi , described all activities that harm feeling of anyone as illegal.
Moreover, Some countries have banned all these activities.
There are NGO that don't allow these practises.
Recently,Developed nations has launched strict rules to ban such tests.
In conclusion ,although in order to cure diseases with therapy the use of animals is important but there are in new innovations in computer that don' need any such practises.
- All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them Do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people say that it is necessary to use animals for testing the medicines intended for human beings others however think it is cruel and unnecessary Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27385892116 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69881016812 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668049792531 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8983887298 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7647058824 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1764705882 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181357264123 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513115201879 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434483607962 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483451038099 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528313777377 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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