Some people say that it is not good for children to grow up in the city and that the countryside is more suitable for them. Do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that living in countryside is better than living in a city. I am agree with this. Here my arguments.
Firstly, living in countryside is far from pollution. As we know that more trees in village. It is good for their health. Secondly, villagers usually kinder than people in city, they still hold herritage culture to teach attitute for children.
This is different from urban life in city, that their live is oriented in money. People in city do much more damage for environment and their body. For example, mostly youngsters in city prefer eat junk food for a quickness reason. Some of company owners build factories, which pollutes the air.
In other side, education and technology in city is moving faster than in countryside. Teachers in city usually have higher graduation than in village. Also, student in city get better access in technology than in countryside. This part is important to shape smart generations.
Somehow, smart is not the most important aspect. Attitude will frame a person to be more humanity, sincere and has higher emphaty. Those manners are more urgent than increasing IQ. This part needs to teach in early year of a child. Today we find much smart people but lack of manner and it makes this world worse than before.
Based on the reasons above, I stand in my perspective that living in countryside is better for children's growth. They need to learn kindness and norm first than mathematic or computer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g in countryside is far from pollution. As we know that more trees in village. It ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91532258065 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.558088796 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1417385778 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.4090909091 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.2727272727 20.7667163134 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.22727272727 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238542357203 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645507323215 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741249134297 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120855540096 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784505528563 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.07 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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