Some people say that living in a high-rise apartment block is a lonely experience because there is no community spirit. Others say that people who live in high-rise apartments have a much better sense of community than those who live in houses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the lack of community spirit by living in a high-rise building as opposed to living in houses. While residing in private houses can offer a great sense of community, I believe that living in high-rise apartment makes people close to the community more.
On the one hand, it is said by a group of people that living in high-rise apartment blocks or buildings have a much better sense of community compared to that in private houses. People living in blocks of apartment may feel that they are involved in a community within the building. Residing in a great height, being isolated from the outside is not a pleasant experience at all. Therefore, those individuals who are in the top of the building usually connect with others, which indirectly raise the community spirit. It is reported that about 70 percent of people living in buildings are willing to help other dwellers. The creation of community is natural and unforced. In some apartments, annually, the people there have a general meeting in a restaurant, talking to each other about issues.
On the other hand, living in high-rise apartment blocks can be a lonely experience for some individuals, especially for the introverts who are considered reluctant to communicate with others. These introverts may find it difficult to contact with others. Also, it can be hard to construct a community spirit with the annoying people or the uncooperative individuals. Indeed, how much a person can integrate into the society depends on the whole society itself.
In a nutshell, I do believe that somehow living in high-rise apartment do create a mutual atmostphere and relationship between each individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10071942446 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86918705497 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492805755396 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5629620337 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.285714286 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.520360071791 0.244688304435 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171990168638 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128482400913 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31782021648 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121070985102 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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