Some people say that the main environmental of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believed that the biggest problem of environment nowadays is the extinction of certain species of animals and plants. However, it is said that there are still many more important environmental problems. In my personal point of view, it is best to understand both aspects and find out what should be more prioritized.
Many people believe the loss of particular species of plants and animals is the biggest problem which requires serious actions. It is agreed that the species extinction is a big problem but not the main problem. By reading some researches, we can definitely agree that plants and animals is a key factor in terms of maintaining the biodiversity. The biodiversity can only remain wealthy if the food chains work properly. If some of the essential species disappear in the food chains, the biodiversity will be negatively affected and may lead to unbalanced biodiversity. For instance, the absence of the mice can lead to the shortage of snakes’ consuming source. Therefore, the total number of snake individuals will be badly affected; as a result, that food chain will be slowly disconnected and eventually destroyed.
We can see how important some species are to our environment. However, there is a wide range of environmental problems which are needed to be concerned about. One of those problems is the global warming as we have been suffering for many recent years. Global warming is believed to be one of the most destructively environmental problems that require the most optimized and serious solution. Global warming is considered to be destructive and dangerous due to the effects that it has caused such as climate change, the rise of sea level and ice melting from the poles.
There are many more environmental problems that haven’t been mentioned but in my opinion, all problems ought to be equally taken seriously. Since every environmental problem can negatively affect to the Earth, the governments as well as all pedestrians need to start from the very fundamental beginning and gradually move on so as to save the world.
In conclusion, it is not necessary to consider what problem is more important and should be more prioritized. The main thing is how governments and people deal with them and how they act to each problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hy if the food chains work properly. If some of the essential species disappear in the food...
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Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...amental beginning and gradually move on so as to save the world. In conclusion, it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09549071618 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98143708053 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498673740053 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5484537797 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.105263158 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189452560743 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678903199116 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635685262437 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115342117989 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444089610387 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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