These days, the issue of environmental problems has grown in importance over the past few decades. Some people argue that the lack of specific kind of plants and animals is the most important issue for our world, while others claim that there are more important aspects of environmental worries. This essay disagrees that loss of species of plants and animals is the main nature problem. This essay will discuss both points of view.
On the one hand, many think that the most concerning about nature are just a special type of plants and animals and if they are extinct, we will face by the biggest trouble situation in history. Although the lack of animals and plants species is a big matter because they have a big role in the ecosystem and absolutely have an influence on human's life, but it isn’t the main major. For instance, Persian tigers are a rare species in wildlife, but if loss them, nature will never be destroyed.
On the other hand, many disagree and claim that there are so many problems in the nature that they are so important than particular species of plants and animals. In recent decades human's activities have a big effect on our environment and in my opinion, I believe this is the most critical issue for our world. Global warming is a prime example, what people are the reason for this. Automobiles and industrials cause the pollution of oceans, forests and so on. Forests and oceans conserve nature and these are useful for human's life. If increasing pollution continues, live of our world fall in dangerous.
In conclusion, while the effect of human's activities on the environment is the one of the most environmental major and should have a special vision on this, some still feel that specific species of plants and animals are the most important issue for our environment and ecosystem. However, as long as we are careful to protect of a rare type of nature and wildlife, global warming and its consequences are more essential rather than this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...tem and absolutely have an influence on humans life, but it isn't the main major....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82456140351 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55694690937 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459064327485 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4233045146 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245561862168 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824620299516 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717129849645 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161672576946 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967550143832 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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