It is true that, in this contemporary era, animals and plants are being died nowadays at an unprecedented rate in all over the world. Moreover, number of individuals contemplate that this is the main cause of environmental problems. While, other group of masses introspect that there are more significant environmental problems and I am also totally agreed with this statement.
To commence with, factories are being escalated day by day which are creating pollutions like, air, noise and water. Due to air pollution our ozone layer is in danger not only this but human beings and whole flora and fauna. Furthermore, people are having to confront problems like, cancer, heart diseases and so on. Secondly, new roads and buildings are being constructed these days by cutting infinite trees that is why global warming is rising year by year. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 65% factories are producing different type of pollution which are also the causes of environmental problems.
On the other hand, although plants and animals play an indispensable role in our food chain, scientists prefer to use animals for checking different type of gadgets on them. Additionally, deforestation is common that is why people are having to suffer for getting oxygen these days. For example, in this covid pandemic era, scientists are trying to make new vaccines for people but first vaccines are being used on animals for checking that there is any allergy or hazard sign or not. In addition, individuals are having to purchase man-made oxygen because of lack of oxygen in our atmosphere.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, losing our flora and fauna are the cause of environmental problems yet, we must understand that there are overabundance of reasons available. Eventually, I personally believe that government should make some policies or start camping to stop these things.
- The rate of youth crime is rising in many countries What are the causes of this trend Suggest some solutions to decrease such rate 67
- Some think that students must travel to another country in order to learn its language and customs To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can beneficial for teenagers and the community as well Do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 76
- Many people today especially in the developed world are choosing to have fewer children or none at all Why is this happening and do you think it is a good trend 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18709677419 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89001294424 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9513457399 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188956854078 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623716432379 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421092143381 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11358981266 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335466872375 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.