Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people claim that these days the significant problem of planet’s nature is losing some kinds of plants and animals. Although, others think that there are more important problems in our life.
This essay will discuss the given two points and personal opinion will be provided in the end.
Firstly, there are a lot of considerable reasons of decreasing animals’ and plants’ number. One of them is that year by year atmosphere is becoming worse, and because of this problem, a big amount of living creatures have considerable decrease. For example, in every city there are enough gas factories which spoil the environment. Moreover, on the street it could be seen a large number of different gas cars, and this is one of the main reasons, too.
Second reason is that due to fact that animals are being used for different testing for humans’ benefits, year after year majority of animals suffer from the torment of experiments. For instance, people use them for testing new types of cosmetics to find out allergic signs or other bad irritations.
In addition, because of all these testing over 200 000 animals suffer, which could lead to dying and declining of their quantity.
From the opinions of some people, nowadays there are other serious problems than provided before. Not only animals and plants have important extinction problems, but citizens also have enough difficulties such as decreasing of people’s population year by year. Humanity has a lot of diseases from the same gas machines and works. As an example, lung cancer, heart disease, death, and other chronic diseases.
All in all, it could be seen that there are a lot of environmental problems which can lead to losing particular types of plants and animals. Nevertheless, people believe that there are other considerable problems of humanity. I argue with the group of people who care about decreasing a number of creatures, and believe that people would stop spoiling the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...osing some kinds of plants and animals. Although, others think that there are more impor...
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Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...y will discuss the given two points and personal opinion will be provided in the end. Firstly...
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Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...oreover, on the street it could be seen a large number of different gas cars, and this is one of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78157490815 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558641975309 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3334832753 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4705882353 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214382604178 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715205591389 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593740247135 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104278181485 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838654764785 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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