Environment has always been a blessing to mankind but during recent times it is getting destroyed on a faster rate. Some argue that it is because of the deforestation and loss of animal habitat whereas others say that there are many other concerning factors for it. However, I believe that loss of living organisms contribute as a major factor for the environmental disturbance. This essay will deliberate on both the views.
Some people agree that loss of natural habitat disturbs the whole ecosystem and is the important environment problem. Studies have shown that how loss of plants and animals not only affect the entire food-chain but also affects our natural dependency. For instance, the natural air quality of an area is affected, naturally produced products from plants are reduced and humans are in more danger because of close contact to wild animals, which were forced to move from their habitat.
Despite the loss of organisms, there are other factors which are concerning for the environment. Global warming, is one of the majoir issues seen during recent times. Industries are the prime factors for this concern as not only it hampers the air quality by eradicating polluted gases but also excretes the harmful chemicals in water causing the water life at risk. Tourism also contributes to the problem as lot of people dump the waste specially plastic in water or in open space instead of dustbins.
In my opinion, living organisms are the primary source for us and their reduced number is major cause of concern. Plants and animals are two primary and major sources which humans are dependent on. Infact, lot of
cosmetic industry depends on the natural products excreted by plants and animals. There are many scenarios where natural fruits and extract can be useful for medical purposes.
In conclusion,environment problems are major concerns for the planet and loss of living organisms is one of the sources which contribute to it. Along with other factors which could be hazardous too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11782477341 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67827797953 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2192757763 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6470588235 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191390160979 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06195161631 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553607508064 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895148378805 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052395335357 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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