Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays saving the planet is the most critical problem and it is the most noticeable to all scientists as well as humankind. While some people believe the most concerned issue for the environment is the reduction in particular plant and animal species, others think that there are more environmental problems need people attention. I personally believe those two opinions are correct at certain viewpoints.
First, environment will impact to some plant and animal species, because the earth is all those plant and animals’ habitats. With the consequences of people’s activities, more and more plants are being dropped down for industrialization, as the results some animals loss their homes. For instance, Vietnam government has published a list with hunting restriction to many kinds of bird species, which are already at highest warning level with high chance to get extinct.
Second, there are also more and even direct impacts to humankind as dealing with environmental issues such as global warming or air pollution. Greenhouse effect, global warming cause melting and seawater level keep raising in recent decades, in the meantime on mainland, air is being polluted by factories, transportation and many other sources. These are the factors, which significantly harm people’s health and living quality. It is more critical with developing countries such as India, Indonesia, or Vietnam, where a lot of production and manufacturing activities, which can faster destroy the environment.
While the biological reduction will be the result of environmental problems, there are more critical and essential request to resolve other environmental problems that people are directly being suffered about. All those problems need people attention as well as methodology to tackle them for future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
... industrialization, as the results some animals loss their homes. For instance, Vietnam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, well, while, for instance, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61231884058 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06516385673 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4834371563 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218076690749 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802219199437 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687005061846 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138965762997 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409288037783 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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