There is universal consensus that extinction of some plants' and animals' species is the most serious problem in nowadays. However, other thinks that there are more essential environmental problems make us more concerned. This essay will discuss all underlying causes of both concepts.
As is observed clearly in recent decades, more technology and industrialization is developed, more issues are revealed for our planet's well-being. One of those problems is certainly an extinction and endanger in the species of animals and plants. Intriguingly, we must be aknowledged that the plants engage the most important activities in human life. In particular, it releases oxygen which we inhale with, also plant breathes by carbon dioxide which we exhale with and it is the most influential gas for air pollution and ozone layer depletion. Therefore, plant is the must-survive organism in the world. Furthermore, endangered animal species are the large problem too. To illustrate, some fish are responsible for cleaning the water pollution. If they are gone, our planet water supply will occur a big difficulty.
If we now consider other problems related to the environment, there are a numerous phenomenons which cannot be regulated by plants or animals. For example, global warming, traffic and light pollution. Global warming is the main factor to increase disappearance of some animals and plants such as a polar bear, one of the sacrifices of global warming. Moreover, traffic and light pollution are also the largest causes of air and water pollution which can make some species die.
As far as i concerned, extinction is an occurrence caused by other environmental issues. Henceforth, it is certainly not the most important one as we have to regulate other problems to prevent loss of some type of animals and plants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, in fact, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29310344828 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98653538052 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6735069319 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2941176471 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244672045069 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075968334879 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492132648776 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164490223513 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419509887837 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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