there has been many controversial arguments surrounding some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. in my opinion, the latter statement outweight the former one. i agree with those who suppose that there are other imminent thread like global warming, air pollution, illegal deforestation, etc... need to be tackled first
on the one hand, there are a wide variety of reasons why masses consider that the species are in the edge of extinction ought to be preserved. first, the balance of ecosystem is neccesary to keep the earth safe. each and every species play a paticurlar role to maintain the natural habitat for living things across the globe. A case in point is marine algae and seaweed produced more than 50% oxygen in atmosphere which contributed to maintain the actual existence on the earth. it seems every creature is important to keep the ecosystem up
on the other hand, i see eye to eye with those who reckon that global warming, the air pollution, illegal deforestation are the major problems need to be solved first. The reduction of air and land quality which lead to the decline in living condition and also causing the world become unhabitable place for living beings. In addition, the removing of tropical rainforests and green regions have become a primary cause of reducing rains and lead to the incerase of deserts all over the world. it is completely clear that in order to improve the environmental conditions, we must aim to enhance the cleaness of air and soil fertility
in conclusion, while there are a lot of opinions about the best method of improving environmental condition, i suppose that the most appropriate approach is reduce carbon dioxide level, increase greenery and soil fertility
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also, but, first, so, while, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01935483871 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77081564793 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.0451687927 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235314955038 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901893672117 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145895463504 0.0667982634062 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138591187423 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151059088331 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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