There is common belief that we are facing severe environmental problems in our time. I think more significant problems should be taken into consideration apart from the extinct of certain plants and animals.
It is a fact that many species of plants and animals are endangered or even have been lost in our planet. People cannot deny the evidence that can be found in the big rivers and forests and the report that polar bears are moving form there used inhabits to look for food.
However, more important damages are being implemented on our environment which are likely to cause further loss of species in the world.
Firstly the soil degradation has become a worldwide scientific issue that will reduce the productivity of land that ensure the sufficient food for human due to abuse use of fertilizers and other chemicals. Secondly, the threat to forest is contributing much to the problem of global warming which will further enhance the level of sea and submerged most coastal cities. What is more important, most current cosmopolitans are located by the sea or rivers such Shanghai, Hongkong and many cities in USA and in Japan.
Last but not least, human beings are imposing much greater pollution to the environment than ever, especially to the oceans. The daily waste, sewage and chemicals flow along the rivers to the oceans. The nuclear leakage in Japan will not only lead to lethal outcomes of species living in the oceans, but also will does harm to the planet through recycling eco-system.
In conclusion, more issues about environment besides the loss of some plants and animals should draw enough attention and instant and comprehensive measures need to be taken to improve the situation.
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. 61
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is imp 78
- The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity 73
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he planet through recycling eco-system. In conclusion, more issues about environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, apart from, i think, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0350877193 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62086708754 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6995661885 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16340200603 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579690738079 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564738397309 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883355322871 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607486646475 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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