In recent decades, environmental issues are the headline topic among people because some people believe that the most problem is caused by the extinction of species of plants and animals, while others argue that there are some significant issues. This essay will explain both of these views.
To begin with, the number of extinction for some species such as floras and faunas will also endanger the environment. Those species are part of the cycle in the earth ecosystem. They also have their roles to create the sustainment of the environment. For example, the snake is the consumer of rats in a farming area so that if the number of snakes is decreased caused by human activities, the population of rats will increase and create the supply chain of food in this ecosystem in the unstable condition.
On the other hand, there are many considered issues that also affect the damaging environment. First, global warming is an important issue. This problem is caused by pollution from industry, transportation, and household waste which affect the increase in earth temperature. Due to the fact that the world becomes hot, some species' life will be disturbed. For instance, some polar bears which lived in the north and south poles take the risk because of the amount of decreasing land related to the melting ice on those areas. In addition, other issues such as bushfires in rain forest also are the most reason which affects the environmental problem. some species are lost their home, the oxygen level is decreased, and some species become extinct according to this condition so that it also affects to the unbalance condition.
In conclusion, the extinction of particular species such as planes and animals is the one factor that brings to the environmental problem. However, there are some problems which also damage to the large scale of the environment, namely global warming and damaging rain forest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07278481013 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64260591975 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509493670886 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1294965395 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.866666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225573982998 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805719504009 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567510547968 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158807168589 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613832623379 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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