It is often argued that it would be better if cell phones are not allowed to use in social location including reference room, department store and community transportation. I completely agree with forbidding smart phones in crowded places as they are causing a huge amount of problematic issues there.
First of all it is not an indisputable fact that digital gadgets have brought unbelievable revolution and changed the way of our life.Even we can say without any doubts , they can make the positions we have progressively lighter in both our life styles and professions.For instance, by the help of the clever devices it is absolutely manageable to get in touch with the people anywhere and any time. They are really comfortable to use as well as bring together. Additionally, they are considered as a useful and entertaining item in accordance with educational as well as enjoyable purposes. We can listen music and have a relax while we are on bus. Furthermore, using their camera it is more convenient to catch and save a crucial occurrence. Therefore, It is more vital to note that smart phones are the major part of our life even they are as urgent as water.
On the other hand, they are becoming the main cause making individuals' behaviour worse counting a sense of disrespect and unconsciousness. Addicting to the screen of mobile phones or being busy with them isolate person from the other evidences and it leads to reducing the attention to the around along with ignoring the surroundings in social places then it seems the first aspect for deterioration in personality. For example, we sometimes witness such kind of situations mostly on public transportations, on bus, especially young generations do not notice a circumstance happening nearby, they forget to give a seat to elderly people sitting as there are nothing around and also they make the others feel irritate or they miss their destination and get lost. So, using gadgets in community places not only isolate oneself but also it will be a reason to the other problems.
By way of my conclusion I once again reaffirm my position that even the cell phones have a huge impact in our life, their usage should be limited in some public area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93054575195 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.328684949 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.923076923 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8461538462 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151275208825 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459367304946 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466749572529 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101163269073 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462027860229 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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