Some people say that the most important thing for being rich is people have opportunity for helping other person ? Do you agree or disag
Over the past decades, the gap between poor and rich has never ceased to draw public attention and provoke debates. Although supporting to the people who are in the financial problems and difficulties is necessary, the issue as to whether giving money to them should be the best way or not remain controversial. From my own perspective, there are numerous ways of helping those people, and monetary support certainly is not the best one.
On the one hand, some may argue that monetary aid should be prioritized in some urgent situations. this argument could be true to some extent because people need money for even the basic necessities like food, water, clothing in order to survive. For example, in natural distracters such as flood and earthquakes, the immediate needs like food and medicine are urgently necessary. this example indicates that the helping-hands of individual who have financial ability play an important role to saving those difficult people.
On the other hand, it is important to recognize that giving money to the poor would be a very shortsighted approach. In fact, providing education and job training is better way to help those people, as the saying go “education can live individual out from poverty and bringing the promising careers”. Besides, governments should take proactive action in supporting people who live under poverty line. They are recommended that national budget should be distributed, coordinated to high priorities such as the spread of education, the improvement of public health-care services. As a result, the poor people could easily to that social welfare.
In conclusion, the helping-hands of the haves has a far-reaching influence on the others life. However, the have nots should be provided an opportunity to promote their life by themselves, instead of just giving money
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...nd difficulties is necessary, the issue as to whether giving money to them should be the best...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... prioritized in some urgent situations. this argument could be true to some extent b...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... because people need money for even the basic necessities like food, water, clothing in order to ...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...od and medicine are urgently necessary. this example indicates that the helping-hand...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ves has a far-reaching influence on the others life. However, the have nots should be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28911564626 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98057985358 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6381227796 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.071428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235045229612 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736332624523 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361584761053 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131415527373 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404009738727 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.