Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays unification of people is becoming more and more significant than it used to be decades or centuries ago. It is considered by some individuals that music is an excellent method fostering to unity of the society, while others do not agree with this opinion. This essay will examine both points of view.
On the one hand, music can connect people in spite of various cultures or ages. What I mean is that listening to favourite songs which have deep senses fosters to situations when individuals forget about their own problems and unify in order to solve a general issue. That is because music may influence on persons on a chemical level, and this fact is proved by scientists. For example, many stars and groups often conduct special concerts which have a charity as a main goal. It is worth mentioning the project "Live Aid" which was perform in 1985 and brought people from all over the world together.
On the other hand, individuals are united by general problems and disasters such as environmental issues or awful accidents. For instance, in contemporary day pollution has become a real problem which affects on all nature creatures. Today many countries restrict the use of plastics destroying marine life and sea inhabitants. As for disasters, I could not help indicating the fire of Notre Dame of Paris which occurred this April. The whole world united and felt pity because the culture is our heritage which might have been lost.
To sum up, it is a controversial issue, but I am inclined to support that position that general problems and disasters have more effect on unification of people than music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'performed'.
Suggestion: performed
... project 'Live Aid' which was perform in 1985 and brought people from all ove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, i mean, such as, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94927536232 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67269521774 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634057971014 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4233867174 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179253684297 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559113508388 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612741141268 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109449808141 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651016506227 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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