Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music brings joy and peace to everyone. It is argued that music connects people from various countries and ages. I strongly agree with this statement and will discuss how individuals are getting connected to each other through music, although they belong to a different culture and age group.
As we all know music has no specific language and it is still easily understood by everyone. It touches people's soul and making them feel the same emotions, even though the language is different. People across distinct culture get connected to each other just by the rhythm and able to get the idea whether it is a celebration or disappointment. An example for this would be a song named WAKA WAKA sung by an African singer Shakira in Spanish got praises from all over the world to celebrate the FIFA world cup irrespective of the language it has sung in. Hence music is widely enjoyable by masses without being criticized about separate culture and language.
Music is related to voice, melodies and rhythm. People from all age groups enjoy music according to their liking. It tends to believe older people do not like new generation music, but a recent research conducted at old age homes to figure out what makes them happy and the result show that people who are living far away from their family gets positivity and a sense of pleasure after hearing youthful music thus making them feel young. Therefore music is responsible for making people happy despite of any age.
In sum, it is quite clear from the above essay how music is getting everyone connected even though they belong to different cultures and ages. I strongly agree that music plays a vital role in order to connect people from across the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90344827586 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40166658346 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5778962247 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272009099415 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100928980265 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500721029377 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177058418483 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571791868419 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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