Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Our enjoyment of music dated back to the Stone Age, when objects were knocked against hard surface to produce sounds. We are intrinsic to hearing sounds that trigger our emotions and memories. Such ability is universal and facilitates the assembly of the minds of many, regardless of ages and nationalities. Hence I agree with the statement to a large extent.
First, music is boundless by one's religious belief, race, or any other factors. As simple as it is, one needs not to be a professional music analyst or experienced instrument player to find pleasure in listening to a music piece. Moreover, educational background is not a deciding factor in determining one's ability in creating music that others might resonate with. For instance, one might be revoked a sense of sorrow by hearing a music piece composed in Minor tone like Piazzolla's "Soledad". On the other hand, whenever Beethoven's Symphony no.5 is played, we might be instantly alerted and stressed. By listening to the same piece of music, it evokes a moment of shared sentiment when people find comfort in knowing they are not alone.
Albeit most people have their own musical preferences which might lead to biases against certain genres, there also lies a chance of mutual understanding by distinguishing the differences. Whilst beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, one can always get to know the others by contemplating what their tastes in music say about them. For example, hearing an unusual music written in Pentatonic Scale, one might tell the listener's interest in Asian cultures. Thus it opens a window of communication which leads to one another discussion in traveling to Asia and the exotic cuisines.
In conclusion, the power of music lies beyond cultures and ages. All human beings are inherent to enjoy it and hence facilitates cohesion and brings people together in unison.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0974025974 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90931556415 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62012987013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.988738944 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183522443684 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584739016711 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457195580585 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11604907462 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353587647745 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.