It is often said that music creates shared experiences between people regardless of their cultural backgrounds and ages. I completely agree with this view and there are some reasons that can be explained for this trend.
Music connects and unites everyone no matter who they are or where they live in the world. The best example of this is the Live Aid concert for that took place back in 1980s. Two main live concerts were held simultaneously in the Uk and Us and they were aimed at raising funds for famine relief in Ethiopia. These two concerts actually attracted an enormous number of broad audiences and became a huge success. And these concerts not only succeeded brilliantly at drawing worldwide attention but also created a profound impact on international public awareness of famine.
Apart from reaching across national and cultural boundaries, music is a real form of entertainment that bring people from different generations together. Individuals from different age groups all enjoy a memorable melody, a strong rhythm or a beautiful singing voice, and some prime time shows have proved that both the old and the yuong can share the same taste in music. These are some popular music contests that are shown on TV such as the X Factor, the Voice which always have many viewers from all ages enjoy watching.
In conclusion, I believe that music plays an important role in people's daily lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96186440678 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58421431047 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669491525424 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6722106457 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.454545455 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203127902292 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696387350076 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669369400627 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125053624141 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701079912433 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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